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Post by ---> Rose <--- on Dec 25, 2010 15:16:22 GMT -5
Main Characters ------------------------- Hayley- 17 year old girl who's up to any challenge. Ryan- A boy who helps Hayley through the Wastelands.
Plot -------------------- Hayley wakes up in D.C after surviving the Apocalypse. She must discover what happened while she was asleep. And to do that she needs to find the Hidden Keys!
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Post by Alice {not-you-average teacup on Dec 26, 2010 14:12:35 GMT -5
Sounds cool! Hope you start soon!
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Post by ---> Rose <--- on Apr 14, 2011 17:59:14 GMT -5
(Thnx!) Chapter One ------------------------------------------- Hayley after about five minutes of lounging around finally mustered the will to get up. "Ugh.." She looked around. "W-where...?" A boy walked up to her. Well not walked. More like run. "M-miss..." he was out of breath and sounded concerned. "Are you OK? I've been calling your name, like, forever."
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Post by .: Storm :. on Aug 28, 2011 20:51:27 GMT -5
It's really good! Can't wait for you to continue.
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Post by ---> Rose <--- on Sept 6, 2011 20:28:24 GMT -5
.:Chapter Two:.
Hayley stood up and made sure not to make direct eye contact with Ryan. "Y-yeah. I'm fine. I certainly don't need some boy I don't even know protecting me. I'm a lone wolf; translation, I don't need protection."
Ryan smiled and followed her as she walked down Ranger Way. "L-look, I'm not saying I'm confused and need your help or anything. But do you know what happened here?" Ryan sighed. "You've really been out cold THAT long, have you..." Hayley seemed confused but let him continue anyway.
"A second generation Hitler has been brewing for a while now. He decided to make a zombie army and kind of send the world into apocalypse. What we stand in now is nothing more than deserted wastelands."
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Post by .: Storm :. on Sept 7, 2011 9:19:09 GMT -5
I love it! Please continue!
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Post by ---> Rose <--- on Feb 18, 2012 15:41:53 GMT -5
(Thanks for the support!)
.:Chapter Three:.
Hayley took a step back. "Apocalypse? Give me a break," she said showing Ryan mixed interest, "if the Apocalypse was here, wouldn't we all be dead?"
Ryan laughed. "You've watched too many science shows." He said, pulling out a hand gun from his bag and tossing it to Hayley.
"Wha- what's this for." She said, catching it clumsily.
Ryan let out a chuckle. "To not die when the zombies smell you and hunt you down. But since you don't believe, I'll be on my way." He turned to go.
"Fine; I don't need you!" Hayley puffed and stared at the hand gun. "Apocalypse isn't real, and zombies aren't real!"
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Post by .: Storm :. on Mar 1, 2012 1:06:28 GMT -5
I'm really liking the denial that Hayley shows, for some reason.
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Post by ---> Rose <--- on Jun 7, 2012 18:55:07 GMT -5
(XD Hayley's a non-believer, skeptic type character. Glad you like it!)
.:Chapter Four:.
As Hayley walked along the dusty, bloodlined streets, she couldn't help but think that maybe Ryan was telling the truth. Of course he made it up to scare you, Hayley. The voice in her head rang. It liked to order her around, tell her what to do, make her feel weak in comparison. He saw you had no clue of what was going on, and he took total advantage of that.
Hayley nodded and then looked up into the sky, only to notice something very strange. Hell's Comet. She had read about it in a few myths online, and never believed them-- until now when it was right there in front of her.
Hell's Comet is a comet that can raise people from the dead and turn them into zombies. The closer it gets the more powerful it is. And it's said that when Hell's Comet reaches the ground... Hitler will be reborn. And he'll kill off everyone, except a good bit of women, and then use those women like sex dolls and create a 'perfect race.'
Hayley shuddered. "No, it's not..." She heard moaning in her right ear and she jumped back, turning to see none other than a zombie. "It's not.. real... right..?" She tightened her grip on Ryan's hand gun and as she realized he was telling the truth, she realized something else. She would have to fight to stay alive.
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Post by .: Storm :. on Nov 15, 2012 13:19:38 GMT -5
I really love this, especially Hayley's denial and how you see she isn't as tough and uncaring as we make her out to be, Her double personality is really cool too!
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